You make me sad

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You make me sad
I have had a boyfriend but he never care with me
I was sad but I never showed it to everyone
my friends have told me that he is not a good person
but I did not hear it
he has broken my heart

I have given everything whom I have but until now you did not care with me
I never cry
I never hate you
I just want you to love me
I am sorry if I have broken your heart
you have taken my heart
you have made me falling in love with you
I love you but I hate you
don't back in my life
don't make me sad again
please far away
far away
far away

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  1. Unknown14 November 2016 pukul 22.38

    Grammar part:
    he never care with me --> he never cared about me
    I have given everything whom I have --> which I have
    don't back --> don't come back

    You composed very attractive one. I can see you have sent your emotional feeling to your readers in a strong way.
    Good Job..

    BalasHapus
  2. Manohara my Lovely15 November 2016 pukul 16.15

    Thanks for your comment Mam Widya
    it will makes me more better :)

    BalasHapus
  3. Unknown15 November 2016 pukul 16.22

    It is great lyric
    Your love story is so tragic

    BalasHapus
  4. Unknown15 November 2016 pukul 16.35

    Ohhh, this is the real love I think, don't be sad, always smile and be happy 😉

    BalasHapus

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